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June 3, 2013
trinity by *1510 is a fine example of architectural abstraction in its simplest form; clean shapes, and sharp tones.
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part of facade of skyscrapers in Sarajevo

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Image size
3450x3450px 4.22 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS Kiss X4
Shutter Speed
1/256 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 8, 2012, 12:24:32 PM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Sensor Size
15mm
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

While certainly visually striking, unfortunately this photograph lacks much else. It can be said that appeal with simplicity is valuable, but this is perhaps too simple; there is missing the impression of timing or composition, with the shot relying too much on the vision of the architect rather than any quality inherent to the frame.

More interesting, perhaps, would have been including the architecture in a larger shot. Photograph it against a drab sky, photograph it with people, even a slight tilt to the shot or the addition of perspective could make all the difference. Anything to add situational contrast and to portray it rather than simply show it. Something to convey that this is more than just a pattern. As I see it, it misses that mark.